please my parents dont understand english to well and i dont have any brothers or sisters so please edit my paper give me pointer and tell me what you think it will me alot to me.

Change and growth is a very important factor in a person’s life. People are constantly
changing and growing. Whether they are changing from a loss or a gain. This is a very common
factor in a persons life. The decisions that we make in our lives will define what kind of person
we will become.
When I was 10 years old I had an Abyssinian cat named Tony. I loved being around Tony
and playing games with him. Day, by day Tony seemed to be gaining more weight. Tony would
just sit on the couch when I came home from school, doing absolutely nothing. Therefore, my
dad and I took Tony to the veterinarian. “Tony’s heart is failing, he is a very ill cat, stated the
veterinarian. So, my dad and I took Tony home and hoped for the best. The next day I came
home from school, and I saw my mom. She looked upset. I knew Tony had passed away. I was
devastated and had no idea what to do.
When I look back at Tony’s death I realize that he was not a major part of my life, however I
Will never forget him. I know realize that death is just part of your life. You are most likely going
to experience death in some point of your life, and you have to learn to deal with it. It has been
weird not having Tony around but I have now adjusted to it. I now realize that he will not be
there when I come home, and his water bowl will always be empty. I am okay with that.
Tony’s death reminds me of the song “Open Arms” by Journey. “Living without you, living
alone, and this house seems so cold without you, wanting you near me”. I am living without
Tony and my house seems so cold without him. Sometimes I just want Tony near me and I just
want to see him. This song reminds me of how much I miss Tony.
I had learned a valuable life lesson through this experience. I learned that nothing lasts
forever. Loss is just a part of life. In life you have to be strong and prepared. The strongest in
life will survive and the weakest will die.
srry its in a weird fromat it just pasted like this

p.s how old do you think i am from writing this paper

p.s.s thank you all in advance!
does this paragraph seem like it would be from a 14 year old?

does anything need to be changed this is in chronilogical order and my teacher wants it this way anthing do i need to change? grammer?

Change and growth is a very important factor in a person’s life. People are constantly changing and growing. Weather they are changing from a loss or a gain. This can be a very important factor in a person’s life. The decisions in our life define what kind of person we are.
When I was 10 years old I cat an Abyssinian cat named Tony. I loved being around him and playing games with him. Day, by day Tony seemed to be gaining more weight. Tony would just sit on the couch when I came home from school, doing absolutely nothing. Therefore, my dad and I took Tony to the veterinarian. “Tonys heart is failing, he is a very ill cat” stated the veterinarian, so my dad and I took Tony home and hoped for the best. The next day I had came home from school, I saw my mom and she had looked upset, I knew Tony had passed away, I was devastated and had no idea what to do.
When I look back at Tony’s death I realize that he was not a major part of my life, however I will never forget it. I now realize that Death is just a part of your life that you are going to experience it at one point or another, and you have to learn to deal with it. It has been weird with my cat not being around but I have adjusted to it. I am doing just fine now without Tony.
Tony’s death reminds me of the song “Open Arms” by Journey. “Living without you, living alone, and this house seems so cold with you, wanting to hold you, wanting you near me.” This song reminds me of how much I miss Tony. I am living without Tony and this house seems so cold without him. Sometimes I just want Tony near me and I just want to see him.
I had learned a valuable life lesson through this experience. I learned that nothing last forever. Loss is just a part of life. In life you have to be strong and prepared. The strongest in life will die and the weakest will survive.